Thank you so much for the feedback. I wanted to almost overindulge in imagery, to make the world a living breathing thing and the character voice I was playing with really lends itself to saturation of images. I'm super-pleased that you enjoyed my treatment of Vic, I always get worried when an OC gets to have the whole POV to a story.
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Date: 2007-10-06 09:22 pm (UTC)